I'm seeing lots of packages with many missed opportunities, especially in the writing department and the use of natural sound.
So I'm willing to try an experiment.
Find a package you've done recently that you weren't entirely happy with.
Send me the following:
-the script, including lead-in
-shot sheet listing the video you had
-list of nat sound that you had, even if you didn't use it
-transcription of sound bites
-description of your standup (what you did: did you just stand there, walk and talk, etc.)
I'll post your original (without your name) and the revised version, hopefully pointing out opportunities you missed. Feel free to change the names of the people who provided the bites, the location, whatever.
If you're up for it, fire away.
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