The package clinic is open

Okay, we're going to try something different. I've heard from a bunch of people who say they read all kinds of suggestions yet still aren't "getting it" when it comes to package construction.

So here's the deal... Send me the script of a package that you felt missed the mark. Take out your name and location, because we're going to post examples. List the video and nat breaks that you have available. And tell me what you'd like to have done with the package that didn't work out.

I'll "re-package" your story so that you can see how things might have turned out differently.

The clinic won't be open forever, so fire away. Send all materials to tvnewsgrapevine@gmail.com. I'll be waiting with the red pen.